The blog is looking good, but make sure there's a running commentary throughout - saying why you did what you did and what you found out from doing it.
Some posts improve presentation, maybe by just making a few key points bold or using bullet points, etc. TA work is mostly good but key words can be added and spelling can be improved in a few places. Your TA member profile needs more – it’s pointless unless you turn the findings into useful info for you…how does it help shape your video? Your Pitch post would benefit from a breakdown of what your idea is/was, and how feedback changed it (if at all). M-E-S post needs more detail and thought – what’s it all mean?? You need to get the following done by next week:
The blog is looking good, but make sure there's a running commentary throughout - saying why you did what you did and what you found out from doing it.
ReplyDeleteSome posts improve presentation, maybe by just making a few key points bold or using bullet points, etc. TA work is mostly good but key words can be added and spelling can be improved in a few places. Your TA member profile needs more – it’s pointless unless you turn the findings into useful info for you…how does it help shape your video? Your Pitch post would benefit from a breakdown of what your idea is/was, and how feedback changed it (if at all). M-E-S post needs more detail and thought – what’s it all mean??
You need to get the following done by next week:
Shot lists, shooting schedule, storyboards
Done!
ReplyDeleteGetting there but what about actors (in terms of how they act/what they do in the video) and props?
ReplyDeleteConnotations of each choice and their desired effect on the overall message of the video needs to be communicated in a bit more detail.
Otherwise some good choices suitable for the video and well explained.
B
this has been done
ReplyDeleteThanks remarked to an A - same with TA work
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