GoodIn the intro - set out what CLAMPS stands for, and mention the other areas you go on to discuss too.Characters - think about age, attitude, style - Pop is very centred on youth, appeal, flaunty outgoing people who behave in certain waysNarrative - mention that most pop vids use narrative based ideas, maybe find another e.g. too (What Goes Around...?)Themes - give examples - love, romance, parties, socialising etc. Annotate the examplesGood stuff otherwise - well written and nice range of examplesA/B
Pretty much there. I think some of the individual examples could still be discussed in a bit more detail with regards to what you're talking about at the time. And maybe more than 1 e.g. in every case too. A-
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ReplyDeleteIn the intro - set out what CLAMPS stands for, and mention the other areas you go on to discuss too.
Characters - think about age, attitude, style - Pop is very centred on youth, appeal, flaunty outgoing people who behave in certain ways
Narrative - mention that most pop vids use narrative based ideas, maybe find another e.g. too (What Goes Around...?)
Themes - give examples - love, romance, parties, socialising etc. Annotate the examples
Good stuff otherwise - well written and nice range of examples
A/B
Pretty much there. I think some of the individual examples could still be discussed in a bit more detail with regards to what you're talking about at the time. And maybe more than 1 e.g. in every case too.
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